...Story Time 2

Posted by Ronnica on Oct. 10, 2011, 5:08 p.m.

Story Time

Sitting in my lonely apartment, tired and frustrated. I've been stuck in the hospital for a month, recovering from the stab wound and miscarriage. After being surrounded by doctors, nurses and the occasional police officer, I was too uncomfortable being alone at night. Every sound sent a jolt of fear up my veins.

While recovering, the police helped me set up my documents for relocation. I wasn't safe here anymore and needed to get out. I planned to go north in two weeks. Just enough time to get my affairs in order.

At least I thought so. I was startled by a knock at the door. I stood frozen for a couple of seconds before I went over to open it.

There stood one of those familiar faces I couldn't stand to see holding flowers. He looked surprised to see me too.

"What are you doing here, Kai?"

"I heard you were in the hospital so I went by today. The nurses told me you were sent home and I came right over. I got these for you." He handed me the flowers. They were perfect.

"Thank you. How did you find out I was in the hospital?"

"The same way we met. Sorry." He looked down at his feet for a moment.

"Well then, you can tell them to stop following me. I'm being relocated." I went to shut the door but he stopped it with his foot and came in.

"What?! Why would you relocate?!" He put his hands on my shoulders and looked me in the eyes.

"V, this isn't you. This isn't who you are. What happened?"

I fought to keep the tears back as I explained, "I just want to be normal. I had a chance, and I blew it. I lost everything and now I just want to start fresh."

He stroked my cheek, "They told me what happened. Nothing was your fault. You can't possibly leave here…" He turned around to shut the door and lock it. I put the flowers in the kitchen sink and we sat down on the couch in the living room.

We sat there and talked for hours. He told me how the workplace was different without me, and if I don't go back there, it doesn't mean I have to leave town. But my decision was already made. He wrapped his arms around me and held me for a while. I had always liked him, but could never tell him.

Suddenly he kissed my forehead. I looked up at him slightly perplexed. I know he was just being a good friend, but even that was unexpected. Or so I thought until he tipped my chin up and kissed me softly on my lips.

A few soft kisses turned into making out, which then lead to some touching. As he was feeling his way around me, his hand brushed over my right side where my wound was.


"Sorry! What happened?"

"It's okay, it's just that, my stitches were taken out last week but my skin is still tender there."

"Really? Let's find out where else it's tender."


Castypher 12 years, 7 months ago

Good thing I looked up before posting. I hate being the first to comment on things since I like to play off what others say.

But, good writing as usual. Makes me want to get back to my own. Write some longer stuff. People are sure to read it.

Ronnica 12 years, 7 months ago

@ SpecNec : Haha thanks! Slightly confusing people to think it's real is what I strive for.

@ Kilin : Thank you! I would like to make my stories longer but it's NSFW.

Castypher 12 years, 7 months ago

Story Time 1 had me thinking it was real. You had me here until "stab wound", after which I said "Ah, right."

Also (according to many 64D users), one shouldn't browse 64D while at work. So that solves that problem.

…But really, just tack "NSFW" on it if you're worried. Unless you write these at work, in which case I commend you for doing something I could probably never do.

JuurianChi 12 years, 7 months ago

I enjoyed reading this.

Then I got depressed.

*thumbs up*

Ronnica 12 years, 7 months ago

@ Kilin : I didn't literally mean "work" but just that I've been told not to write sexually explicit things in detail and such.

@ Steven : I know =P

@ Juuri : I'm sorry =[

@ Cyrus : Then you'll like part 3 ;D

pounce4evur 12 years, 7 months ago

oooh thank god. i thought this was for real & i was like D,: but then I clicked on the link & scrolled down & saw that you said "It's just a story." scared me for a second there. very, very nice writing. totally believed it for a second there, it was so good xD

Ronnica 12 years, 7 months ago

Thanks =] I think that's what I enjoy about my writing is that a lot of it is true, and the rest is based on truth =P

pounce4evur 12 years, 7 months ago

oh man, I don't know whether to be amazed at that or concerned :(

Ronnica 12 years, 7 months ago

Be amazed that no one is concerned XD