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Posted by link2x101 on Sept. 16, 2011, 4:50 p.m.

Variant Displacement

Quote:
Whisking me into insanity,

A silent verse goes by, entranced, you see.

Never has the scarlet domain,

Ever scarred my imperfect name.

It's all in how you play the game.

A quick disease, short and but not still,

A mindless element, pass lost, it never will.

The demon looks onward, finding its place,

Finally moving, near as wind, but not in a race.

It's all in how you read your name.

Variant displacement, a shadow from the light.

The light that once was a sun, but now not near as bright.

It passes continually, through this moment as last.

It moves on to the future, affecting another, while some are in the past.

It's all in how you make the rain.

And it'll all make sense again.

Someday.

Comments

Quietus 12 years, 7 months ago

that was.. amazing.

link2x101 12 years, 7 months ago

really?

MMOnologueguy 12 years, 7 months ago

whiskey me into insanity,

a silent verse goes by, entranced, you see.

Never has the red domain name,

ever fuckeuguysagyuf

fuck it

I just read whiskey

then I decided to post it

then I decided to keep going

link2x101 12 years, 7 months ago

XD

link2x101 12 years, 7 months ago

Bump because I want input on this now O.o

JuurianChi 12 years, 7 months ago

If songs had sequels, this is the Sequel to Viva la Vida.

link2x101 12 years, 7 months ago

That's it. One more nice (Edit: Or critical, really.) comment and I'm going to do something with this.

MMOnologueguy 12 years, 7 months ago

MAKE IT A DEATH METAL SONG

link2x101 12 years, 7 months ago

I don't have the voice nor talent for such a great genre.

Toast 12 years, 7 months ago

BLARGH I HAVE NO COMMENT

MY REVIEW IS THAT THE WORDS ARE IN A CERTAIN ORDER

STOP BUMPING