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Posted on March 12, 2017 at 18:04


Just read through your comic on the train. It's kinda...cute. And I don't mean that in a condescending way! The story has a good hook that will keep you reading.

I really like the greyscale shading since it's simple enough to convey a basic sense of depth yet not overly detailed to the point of being a distraction. The square heads, however, are confusing depth-wise since they are always square and I feel this conflicts with the bodies drawn at different perspectives. But I am willing to dismiss this as a stylistic choice. After all, they are squares.

Will you be coloring the rest of the pages?
Posted by Aistarin March 15, 2017 22:48 - 5.2 months ago
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Thanks. Best comment I've had so far. I haven't posted in on the GMS forums cos I don't know how/if they would respond.

Sadly, I don't plan on coloring the pages. I instead plan on making the first couple of pages to a story (or rather important pages) colored so you can get a sense of each characters color scheme. Then keep the rest in black and white so that I can get pages done quickly. Manga does this quite often and I think it is a style to follow.

As for the square heads, yes it is deliberate. I Wanted to keep the characters as 2D as possible while playing with depth and perspective. This is how Mickey Mouse's ears work and does not work at all in 3D.
Posted by mazimadu March 17, 2017 12:39 - 5.2 months ago
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